tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39710729630611842.post2963513570947604392..comments2023-03-23T02:36:29.701-07:00Comments on Poetry: not a dirty word: It matters notVivian aka Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18438493107661646979noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39710729630611842.post-76859987956344317422010-06-21T18:52:36.315-07:002010-06-21T18:52:36.315-07:00Wow, F. Lupis....that is the best review, complime...Wow, F. Lupis....that is the best review, compliment I've had on here in a long time! You sure know poetry!.<br />Thank you!Vivian aka Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18438493107661646979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39710729630611842.post-49787767491533878962010-06-21T16:07:46.651-07:002010-06-21T16:07:46.651-07:00I really like the parallelism in between the first...I really like the parallelism in between the first two verses of the first strophe and the first two of the last one, and the rymhes are really well-aimed.<br />I really like your poetry, even if i'm not english, i find it very light, impressive and deep. Like a caress of wind in a summer afernoon.<br /><br />Hope you'll accept my compliments, and sorry for possibile writing errors...<br /><br />Greetings.<br />F.L.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04017679601522853782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39710729630611842.post-78660961027075624972010-06-17T22:08:01.558-07:002010-06-17T22:08:01.558-07:00thank you, Yvonne.thank you, Yvonne.Vivian aka Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18438493107661646979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39710729630611842.post-12629371571831716502010-06-13T22:48:14.820-07:002010-06-13T22:48:14.820-07:00A wonderful poem, the message came across and it w...A wonderful poem, the message came across and it was a pleasure to read.<br /><br />Take care.<br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.com