Soft morning mist caresses me
like your memory
as a ray of sun peeks through
like your blue eyes upon my heart.
The birth of a flower rises up
from the earth
like your soul going home
to meet our Lord.
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Photo by Alex, at Photography by Alex
thanks, Alex!
6 comments:
Hi Vivian, great poem only a suggestion but you could replace fog with mist, and plant with flower and see how that works. I'm really chuffed that you chose my photo for this poem, i think your friend would be very pleased. love Alex.
Hi Alex...great suggestions! Thank you, the pleasure was all mine as I am quite chuffed that you let me use your photo....now I want to photoshop the words onto the photo.
btw....do you ever come back here to read my comments back to you? : )
Beautiful poem Vivian. I like the oof in the photo also. The words in the photo that would be awesome, I need to get Photoshop..
Hi Vivian, yes i do come back to read your comments, which i look forward to. It's good to get your views on my photos and if i can help you out then all is good. If you ever see a photo you would like to use for your poems then just let me know. If you want a particular photo let me know, i have some great views on my doorstep here in Scotland.
Alex....you most definitely do have some great views there on your doorstep in Scotland and I appreciate it much that you bring those views to all of us here.
You are a talented photographer.
Hi Vivian, Thank you for your kind comment, i will set about getting more images of Scotland for all to see. Hear from you soon.
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