Tuesday, March 5, 2013

When You're Away

When you're away
my eyes lack passion and their gleam.
When you're away
my rhymes are forced, my words cliche.
But then you whisper in a dream.
Though we're apart, we're still a team.
When you're away.


Tin Man said...

While you're away
I prey it's a short stay!

Vivian said...

Well, thank you, sir.

Dave said...

this is beautiful :-)

Vivian said...

Thanks, Dave! Good to see you here again....how are you?

Dave said...

It is nice to see you again. I am happier than I've ever been :-)