Saturday, September 13, 2008

Tender are the moments

We tend to take time for granted
dashing here and there
Did I say I love you?
Tender are those moments

We tend to our family each day
in a rush I forgot to say
I love you
Tender are those moments

Tender is the macaroni I cooked
for Bridget, Mike and my darlings
Emily loves butter!
Tender are those moments

We tend to peek at blogs
but leave no replies
Will you take a moment
because, tender is my heart.

© Vivian, Sept. 2008


mariposa said...

Nice poem! By the way, I really like the structure of your poem "Remembering." Thanks for the encouragement & advice on my poem - I'm so glad you liked it! I'll probably post more poems in the future :)

Vivian said...

Thank you! I wrote this off the cuff for my sister in law, Bridget, whom never has the time to stop long enough to leave a comment....she is so very busy with her 4 darling children.

My poem, "Remembering" is a rictameter:

"Rictameter, which has 9 lines, is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with."

Feel free to be a follower of my blog. I want to follow your blog but didn't see where to click on for that. I am still a newbie to this blog stuff! hahaha

mariposa said...

Wow, that's really interesting about rictameters. I will definitely follow your blog - thanks :) Also, thank you so much for the enouragement and advice on my blog.

Vivian said...

You are most welcome! Let all poets of the world unit and help one another! Hey, if you want to join a poet workshop, let me know, I am on a few that I can suggest to you.

Glass Mannequin said...

That's cute. I like it.


Vivian said...

thank you, glass